Purses by CareBear (1A)
My dad wishes he had a purse. What a big pile he has when he empties his pockets! There's a pocket knife, nail clippers, breath mints, cell phone, money clip, change purse, credit cards, a comb... He has to get up extra early just to stuff his pockets. This is a good example of why guys need purses. Hey, they don't have to buy the pink ones with sparkles. Well, there's always Christmas.
posted by rightwriters @ 9:35 PM
2 Comments:
This is such a cute paragraph with great details! We can really "see" your dad's pile and him getting up early to stuff his pockets--good verb there too.
Mama Hen
This is one of my favorite paragraphs! It's so cute and I can tell you chose your words very carefully. You have a talent!
Good job!
-Pickle13
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