Water Taste by Jockulater13 (2A)
People say water doesn't have any taste at all, and maybe they are right. But I think water has a lot of taste. For example, water from the salty ocean is extremely nasty. But water from a mountain stream is marvelous. I don't know about you, but I think water has a lot of different tastes.
posted by rightwriters @ 2:01 PM
4 Comments:
I liked your choice of words, and marvelous was a good adjective. I think you need one more example. How about Perrier or La Croix, some kind of sparkling water?
Hey Jock...differant is spelled different. ;]
GOOD JOB.
Pickle13
hahah I love it I like the nasty that's so you
horzon11
this is such a good paragraph.
care-bear10
I like the subjekt
nirrok 10
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