Cameron Townsend by Pickle13 (2B)
Cameron Townsend was a very determined man. When he decided to become a missionary, he stuck with his idea till he died. He went through tons of hardships but never gave up his faith or belief in his idea of getting the Bible translated to the millions of tribes all around the world. He was so determined, that even when his best friends and wife died, he kept on going until every single job he was given was done. Nothing stopped this committed hero from doing God's work.
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6 Comments:
Very nice job!!!
One suggestion--replace "tons of" with something else. It's too informal. The whole paragraph will sound more mature without it.
Solid main idea in the intro and conclusion, with excellent examples in between!
Oops, that was Mama Hen!
nice job.
i can't realy pont out what was good about it because practically everything was good.
care-bear10
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I love it I think it was perfikt. Nirrok 10
I like how you said that he stuck to his main idea and nothing stoped this committed hero from doing God's work.
Horsefeathers10
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