Soccer by Phantom11 (2A)
I love playing soccer. I love running and dribbling the ball down the field, and the enthusiastic feeling I get after scoring a goal! I can’t explain the extremely wicked feeling of making a nice, clean punt across the field. And when I see someone dribbling about the field, the gratifying feeling of taking it away makes me unbelievably happy. I’ll never forget how much I love playing soccer.
posted by rightwriters @ 11:31 PM
5 Comments:
You have lots of good adverbs and adjectives in this paragraph! Gratifying, unbelievably, enthusiastic and extremely wicked were some really good choices! ;]
Good job!
-Pickle13
the"wicked"feeling. good word coise.
caroline
I like how you basid it on somthing you love to do. Nirrok 10
good job on dicribing it all!
Horsefeathers10:)
you love soccer dont you? you did a great job
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