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Friday, September 29, 2006

The Last Fight by horizon11 (3A)

In the dark I'm thinking how this fight scene will go. Then I hear the line that tells me it's time to go on. I slide on stage with the other Wolves. I can see the people on the edge of their seats waiting to see what's going to happen. I can see the wooden sword come crashing down with a "thud," the music begins and the fight is on. The excitement fills me up and I have to give a big "HOWL!!" I'm being thrown in the air. I have to be fast to get the sword. I corner my opponent and point my sword at his green shirted chest. The smell of my plastic muzzle fills my nose. I can feel the cold sweat running down my neck. As loud as I can, I give my last big "HOWL." I'm about to stab the enemy, but receive the painful blow instead. I get dragged off stage. When I'm out of sight of the audience, I say to my friend that's waiting in the dark "that was good ."

This post won the "Most Exciting Post" Award.

6 Comments:

Blogger rightwriters said...

Very good! I could really imagine the whole thing.

Pickle13

5:28 PM  
Blogger rightwriters said...

I like the way you dicribe everyhting it's so real!


Horsefeathers10

10:57 AM  
Blogger rightwriters said...

I love how I can see every thing with your distinckt ditalls

Nirrok 10

1:15 PM  
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1:15 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice job! your detail was very good.

2:20 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nice job! your detail was very good.

2:21 PM  

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